9.14 homework
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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Describe to me the weather today. Tell me in as much detail as you can.
Today the weather has cooled with autumn coming and i could feel that the breeze become quite cooler than before. Most people i see on the street still wear short clothes but some people are dressed in long clothes. Althogh the summer is over, i heard that the typoon is comming. This weekend is going to rain because of the effect of typoon but i\'m not quite certain if it is going to pour.
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In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below:
>> Describe to me the weather today. Tell me in as much detail as you can.
Today the weather has cooled with autumn coming and i could feel that the breeze become quite cooler than before.
>>>> Today, the weather has cooled with autumn coming and I could feel that the breeze has become quite cooler than before.
Most people I see on the street still wear short clothes but some people are dressed in long clothes.
>>>> correct
Althogh the summer is over, i heard that the typoon is comming.
>>>> Although the summer is over, I heard that a typhoon is coming.
This weekend is going to rain because of the effect of typoon but i\'m not quite certain if it is going to pour.
>>>> It\'s going to rain this weekend because of the effect of the typhoon but I\'m not quite certain if we\'re going to have a downpour.
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