9/15 HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to organize \'peer\'s festival\'. I think participaters will enjoy it because peers can understand each other. There are sections which is devided by an age.
강사 첨삭
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You did a good job!^^ I have made some modifications which you can review later on.
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I want to organize \'peer\'s festival\'.
>>> I want to organize a \"peer\'s festival\".
>>> OR: I\'d want to put together a \"peer\'s festival.\"
I think participaters will enjoy it because peers can understand each other.
>>> I think participants will enjoy it because peers can understand each other.
There are sections which is devided by an age.
>>> There are sections which are divided by age.
>>> OR: Age-specific sections will be created.
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