9/15 I will be success!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, I made up my mind. what is it?
That\'s project name is \'delete Belly fat project\'
I didin\'t have belly fat when to happen covid-19.
but after happen covid-19, I had belly fat......
Today, I download some hometraing app.
I will be success it!!!!!!!!
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^
what is it?
>>What do you think is it?
That\'s project name is \'delete Belly fat project\'
>>It\'s name is \'delete Belly fat project\'.
I didin\'t have belly fat when to happen covid-19.
>>I didn\'t have any belly fat before COVID-19.
but after happen covid-19, I had belly fat......
>>After COVID-19, I had belly fat.
hometraing
>>home training
I will be success it!
>>I will succeed.
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