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2020-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Gabby

학생이 쓴 원문

What was the best novel that you\'ve read? The best novel I have read is Arirang. It has been loved from various generation since published in 1990s. I read this series with my dad\'s book, and I found this book meaningful. At first, it was hard to read because of different dialects, but as I got used to it, I begun to love the message the author was trying to tell. The book is about people who lived during the Japanese Imperialism. There were some people who fought against Japan, and there were some people who betrayed their country for money or authority. As I turned the page, I came to know the history of Japanese Imperialism better. What was said in a short sentence in our textbook meant the lives of many people, and I realized them after reading this novel. Thus, my favorite novel is Arirang.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]. Great work! Thanks for sharing. :)
-T.Gabby 
The best novel I have read is Arirang. 
>> Correct.
It has been loved from various generation since published in 1990s.
>> It has been loved from various generation since it was published in 1990s.
I read this series with my dad\'s book, and I found this book meaningful. 
>> Correct.
At first, it was hard to read because of different dialects, but as I got used to it, 
>> At first, it was hard to read because of different dialects, but I got used to it,  
I begun to love the message the author was trying to tell. 
>> Correct.
The book is about people who lived during the Japanese Imperialism.
>> Correct. 
There were some people who fought against Japan, and there were some people who betrayed their country for money or authority. 
>> Correct.
As I turned the page, I came to know the history of Japanese Imperialism better. 
>> Correct.
What was said in a short sentence in our textbook meant the lives of many people, 
>> Correct.
and I realized them after reading this novel. 
>> and I realized it after reading this novel. 
Thus, my favorite novel is Arirang.
>> Correct. 

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