9.16 Homework

2014-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi ma'am! Good morning! We have another blessed day again. Let's start enjoying today with Power English. Do you think it's possible to have a happy family and a successful career at the same time? There is an adage in Korea, "When one's home is happy,all goes well."I am sure this quote.It's very hard to achieve both of having a happy family and a successful career at the same time. I have been trying hard to achieve them. I am a head of my family.I think that I have been gotten infinite responsibilities and obligations.That's why I've been working hard everyday. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Happy Tuesday Mr. [이름]! This is indeed a blessed day so we should not forget to count our blessings. Anyway, I know that it is not easy to become a father, a husband and the Director of your company. You have a lot of responsiblities to fulfill. But I know that you can do it. Enjoy life, Mr. [이름]! ~t. Kelly^^ Hi ma\'am! Good morning! We have another blessed day again. Let\'s start enjoying today with Power English.>> Correct.Do you think it\'s possible to have a happy family and a successful career at the same time?There is an adage in Korea, \"When one\'s home is happy, all goes well.\" >> Correct. I am sure this quote. >> I am sure/certain of this quote. It\'s very hard to achieve both of having a happy family and a successful career at the same time. >> It\'s very hard to have a happy family and a successful career at the same time. I have been trying hard to achieve them. >> Correct. I am a head of my family. >> I am the head o my family. I think that I have been gotten infinite responsibilities and obligations. >> I think that I have gotten infinite responsibilities and obligations. That\'s why I\'ve been working hard everyday.>> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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