9.16 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
What is your dream house?
My dream house is a country house. I would like to live rural areas, but my wife likes urban life. I want to live in a wide house with a beautiful garden after retirement.
Most of people live in apartment in Korea these days. I think that it can be more helpful to keep privacy for us, but Korean traditional house is not bad to live in.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for this homework. Life in the country is really quiet and simple. I know that you want to enjoy a private life especially after your retirement. Anyway, enjoy life and be happy always!^^
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.What is your dream house?My dream house is a country house.
>> Correct.
I would like to live rural areas, but my wife likes urban life.
>> I would like to live in rural area, but my wife prefers urban life.
I want to live in a wide house with a beautiful garden after retirement.
>> Correct.Most of people live in apartment in Korea these days.
>> In Korea, most people live in an apartment these days.
I think that it can be more helpful to keep privacy for us, but Korean traditional house is not bad to live in.>> I think that it can be more helpful for our privacy, but a Korean traditional house is not bad to live in.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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