9.16 Homework

2015-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! What is your dream house? My dream house is a country house. I would like to live rural areas, but my wife likes urban life. I want to live in a wide house with a beautiful garden after retirement. Most of people live in apartment in Korea these days. I think that it can be more helpful to keep privacy for us, but Korean traditional house is not bad to live in. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for this homework. Life in the country is really quiet and simple. I know that you want to enjoy a private life especially after your retirement. Anyway, enjoy life and be happy always!^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.What is your dream house?My dream house is a country house. >> Correct. I would like to live rural areas, but my wife likes urban life. >> I would like to live in rural area, but my wife prefers urban life.  I want to live in a wide house with a beautiful garden after retirement. >> Correct.Most of people live in apartment in Korea these days. >> In Korea, most people live in an apartment these days. I think that it can be more helpful to keep privacy for us, but Korean traditional house is not bad to live in.>> I think that it can be more helpful for our privacy, but a Korean traditional house is not bad to live in.Thank you! >> Correct.

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