9.17 H omework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! It's a middle day of the week already. Time flies very fast.Good luck all your work today.
Do you think parents are the primary influence of children's eating habits?
Yes, I think so totally. My parents have tended to eat salty foods and I also like to eat salty foods,too. Unfortunately,I have high blood pressure. I guess it was affected by eating habit.
I am afraid if my kids will resemble me.I think that children's eating habits are influenced by their parent's eating habit very strongly.We need to eat more not salty foods for our health.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
Time flies so fast. I hope that you will have a wonderful day. Thank you for doing your homework. It is really important to choose the right kind of food that we feed our children. Stay healthy!
~Kelly^^
Hi there!
>> Correct.
It\'s a middle day of the week already.
>> It\'s the middle of the week already.
Time flies very fast.
>> Correct.
Good luck all your work today.>> Good luck in all your work today.Do you think parents are the primary influence of children\'s eating habits?Yes, I think so totally.
>> Correct.
My parents have tended to eat salty foods and I also like to eat salty foods,too.
>> My parents tend to eat salty foods so, I also like to eat salty foods.
Unfortunately,I have high blood pressure.
>> Unfortunately, I have a high blood pressure.
I guess it was affected by eating habit.>> I guess it was becasuse of my eating habit.
I am afraid if my kids will resemble me.
>> I am afraid that my kids would inherit taht disease from me.
I think that children\'s eating habits are influenced by their parent\'s eating habit very strongly.
>> I think that children\'s eating habits are strongly influenced by their parents.
We need to eat more not salty foods for our health.>> We need to eat less salty foods for our health.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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