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2013-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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How did English come to be so important? I need to speaking English well for my job. I have a meeting with foreigner so often. I envied the [이름]er man in my office who can nice speak English.I really desire to be like him. One of my bucket list is world travel after I get retirement. especilly I would like to trip in Europe countrys such as Swiss,France and Rome. Above all things,I really like learning something. It gives me awesome a life worth living. so English come to be so important for me. It's pretty fun. thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello there^^   I feel happy that you find studying English as important to you. Just one thing, I don\'t want you to feel any frustration about other people whom you think are better speakers than you, rather make it as a motivation! Keep that in mind. I can see your effort and love in learning the language so I know that in time you will become a good speaker of this language. Believe in your heart^^ See you and have a good day~ TEACHER KELLY^^   How did English come to be so important?I need to speaking English well for my job. >> I need to speak English well for my job. I have a meeting with foreigner so often. >> I have meetings with foreigners often. >> OR: I usually have business meetings with foreigners. I envied the [이름]er man in my office who can nice speak English.>> I envy the [이름] ones in my office who can speak well in English. I really desire to be like him. >> CorrectOne of my bucket list is world travel after I get retirement. >> One of my bucket list is to travel around the world during my retirement age. especilly I would like to trip in Europe countrys such as Swiss,France and Rome.>>Especially I would like to travel in European countries such as Switzerland and Rome.Above all things,I really like learning something. >> Correct It gives me awesome a life worth living. >> It gives me awesome feeling and a worth living life. so English come to be so important for me. >>  So English became so important to me. It\'s pretty fun.>> Correctthank you! >>Thank you!

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