9/17 homework
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My favorite food is Kimchi stew that my mother makes.
Kimchi is Korean tranditional food and it is famous for its nutrition and potency.
It is fermented food and lactic acid bacteria from it act to kill harmful bacterias in the digestive tract.
Also, vitamin B, C and folic acid are rich.
My mother puts the pieces of pork and tofu in the Kimchi stew.
Pork and tofu are rich in proteins.
I think Kimchi stew is not only tasty, but also very nutritious.
강사 첨삭
1. My favorite food is Kimchi stew that my mother makes.
>>CORRECT
OR>>My favorite food is my mom\'s kimchi stew.
2. Kimchi is Korean tranditional food and it is famous for its nutrition and potency.
>>Kimchi is a traditional Korean food, and it is famous for its nutrition and potency.
3. It is fermented food and lactic acid bacteria from it act to kill harmful bacterias in the digestive tract.
>>It is a fermented food, and the lactic acid bacteria from it kill harmful bacteria in the digestive tract.
4. Also, vitamin B, C and folic acid are rich.
>>Also, it is rich with vitamin B, C, and folic acid.
5. My mother puts the pieces of pork and tofu in the Kimchi stew.
>>My mother puts the slices of pork and tofu in the kimchi stew.
6. Pork and tofu are rich in proteins.
>>CORRECT
OR>>They are rich in protein.
7. I think Kimchi stew is not only tasty, but also very nutritious.
>>CORRECT
OR>>For me, kimchi stew is not only delicious, but also very nutritious.
Very good essay.
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