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2018-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Question: Do you think someone is a better person after they have been through a challenge? Why? Why not? I think challenge made growing up to me. Because the course of challenge is very difficult and so hard. So challenge got learn. Morever another challenge become a direct experience to myself. If someting challeng is failed, it great itself. Although its challeng is failed, challenge can to learn many things and realize. Challenge is importent, it can be a better life, better person. I think challenge is more helpful our life and can be expand thought to myself.

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Question: Do you think someone is a better person after they have been through a challenge? Why? Why not?
I think challenge made growing up to me. 

>> I think challenges made me grow.
Because the course of challenge is very difficult and so hard. 

>> Because the course of challenges is difficult and hard.
 So challenge got learn.

>> So we learn from challenges.
 Morever another challenge become a direct experience to myself.

>> Moreover, I have experienced a lot of challenges directly.
 If someting challeng is failed, it great itself. 

>> If a challenge failed, it\'s still great.
 Although its challeng is failed, challenge can to learn many things and realize.

>> Although it fails, the challenge give us learning and realization.
 Challenge is importent, it can be a better life, better person. 

>> Challenge is important, it can better life and a person.
 I think challenge is more helpful our life and can be expand thought to myself.

>> I think challenges are more helpful in our life and it can broaden our thinking.  

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