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Question: Do you think someone is a better person after they have been through a challenge? Why? Why not?
I think challenge made growing up to me.
>> I think challenges made me grow.
Because the course of challenge is very difficult and so hard.
>> Because the course of challenges is difficult and hard.
So challenge got learn.
>> So we learn from challenges.
Morever another challenge become a direct experience to myself.
>> Moreover, I have experienced a lot of challenges directly.
If someting challeng is failed, it great itself.
>> If a challenge failed, it\'s still great.
Although its challeng is failed, challenge can to learn many things and realize.
>> Although it fails, the challenge give us learning and realization.
Challenge is importent, it can be a better life, better person.
>> Challenge is important, it can better life and a person.
I think challenge is more helpful our life and can be expand thought to myself.
>> I think challenges are more helpful in our life and it can broaden our thinking.
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