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[Traditionally, on a date, the man would pay for everything. Is this still the case in your country or has it changed? Why did it change?]
Nowadays, the culture between girl and boyfriends is changed a lot.
I think the days of men paying for everything on a date are already over.
In those days, most people well thought that men earn money in society and women care for children and home.
So, I think maybe the financial duty was in men.
However, the era has changed a lot.
Most women and men work after getting married and it means they have their own economic power.
This situation is applied to the girl and boyfriends.
Even if they don\'t pay exactly half, they usually pay one time.
Some people are even burdened by the other person paying everything.
I think this is a very good direction.
In the past, men have economic strain and women have a sense of pressure to compensate for economic support.
The people\'s mind is changing and culture also.
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Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for this homework. I appreciate the effort.
This is a very well thought of writing and I like it! ^ ^
Indeed, times have changed. It\'s no longer the men who carries all the financial burden but also with women. Most couples work these days and share the financial responsibilities at home. I hope it would be the same when it comes to household chores. I hope it would be a shared responsibility too! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>Nowadays, the culture between girlfriends and boyfriends has changed a lot.
I think the days of men paying for everything on a date are already over.
I think the days of men paying for everything on a date are already over.
>>CORRECT
In those days, most people well thought that men earn money in society and women care for children and home.
In those days, most people well thought that men earn money in society and women care for children and home.
>>During those days, people believed that men earn and women stay home and care for their children.
So, I think maybe the financial duty was in men.
So, I think maybe the financial duty was in men.
>>CORRECT
However, the era has changed a lot.
However, the era has changed a lot.
>>CORRECT
Most women and men work after getting married and it means they have their own economic power.
Most women and men work after getting married and it means they have their own economic power.
>>CORRECT
This situation is applied to the girl and boyfriends.
This situation is applied to the girl and boyfriends.
>>This situation also applies to girlfriends and boyfriends.
Even if they don\'t pay exactly half, they usually pay one time.
Even if they don\'t pay exactly half, they usually pay one time.
>>CORRECT
Some people are even burdened by the other person paying everything.
Some people are even burdened by the other person paying everything.
>>CORRECT
I think this is a very good direction.
I think this is a very good direction.
>>CORRECT
In the past, men have economic strain and women have a sense of pressure to compensate for economic support.
In the past, men have economic strain and women have a sense of pressure to compensate for economic support.
>>CORRECT
The people\'s mind is changing and culture also.
The people\'s mind is changing and culture also.
>>People minds are changing and so is our culture.
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