9.18 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning! It's a nice day again. After the rain,it is a very clear and cool weather in korea today.
Are you good at time management?
Yes, I am good at time management.I think I am a timid person. When I try something, I tend to finish it perfectly and I control my schedule very tightly.I always try to study English in my spare time.So I guess I am a dilligent person. but this personality doesn't help me to take a good health. I think that it is two sides of the same coin. but I really like my character.
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday, Mr. [이름]!!!
Enjoy the very nice weather today. Anyway, I agree that you are a diligent person. But, don\'t work too much, ok?kkk.. Take care of your health as well while studying English. Have a great day!
~Kelly^^
Hi ma\'am! Good morning! It\'s a nice day again.
>> Correct.
After the rain,it is a very clear and cool weather in korea today.> After the rain, the weather is clear and cool today.Are you good at time management?Yes, I am good at time management.
>> Correct.
I think I am a timid person.
>> Correct.
When I try something, I tend to finish it perfectly and I control my schedule very tightly.
>> Correct.
I always try to study English in my spare time.
>> Correct.
So I guess I am a dilligent person.
>> Correct.
but this personality doesn\'t help me to take a good health.
>> But this personality doesn\'t help me to have a good health.
I think that it is two sides of the same coin.
>> I think that every coin has two sides.
but I really like my character.
>> Correct.
>> But, I really like my character.
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