9.18 Homework

2014-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi ma'am! Good morning! It's a nice day again. After the rain,it is a very clear and cool weather in korea today. Are you good at time management? Yes, I am good at time management.I think I am a timid person. When I try something, I tend to finish it perfectly and I control my schedule very tightly.I always try to study English in my spare time.So I guess I am a dilligent person. but this personality doesn't help me to take a good health. I think that it is two sides of the same coin. but I really like my character.

강사 첨삭

Happy Thursday, Mr. [이름]!!! Enjoy the very nice weather today. Anyway, I agree that you are a diligent person. But, don\'t work too much, ok?kkk.. Take care of your health as well while studying English. Have a great day! ~Kelly^^ Hi ma\'am! Good morning! It\'s a nice day again. >> Correct. After the rain,it is a very clear and cool weather in korea today.> After the rain, the weather is clear and cool today.Are you good at time management?Yes, I am good at time management. >> Correct. I think I am a timid person. >> Correct. When I try something, I tend to finish it perfectly and I control my schedule very tightly. >> Correct. I always try to study English in my spare time. >> Correct. So I guess I am a dilligent person. >> Correct. but this personality doesn\'t help me to take a good health. >> But this personality doesn\'t help me to have a good health. I think that it is two sides of the same coin. >> I think that every coin has two sides. but I really like my character. >> Correct. >> But, I really like my character.

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