9/19 homework

2023-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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I have never experienced an extended family. I have always belonged to nuclear family since I was born. I\'m very satisfied with current type of nuclear family, but sometimes I think how I feel if I am in an extended family. Family is the largest supportive group for me. If I belong to an extended family, I will get many supportive people. Also, there is no time to feel lonely, and I could share many items with my extended family. However, I consider having my personal time as the most important thing, so I think nuclear family is still better for me.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for always working hard in answering the homework that I am giving you. Just know that I appreaciate this effort a lot. Let us continue to do more exercises again in the class tomorrow. I will see you then! ~ T. Marie ^^
I have never experienced an extended family.
>> I have never experienced being in an extended family.
I have always belonged to nuclear family since I was born.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
I\'m very satisfied with current type of nuclear family, but sometimes I think how I feel if I am in an extended family.
>> I\'m very satisfied with the current type of my nuclear family, but sometimes, I think about how I might feel in an extended family.
Family is the largest supportive group for me.
>> My family is the largest support group for me.
If I belong to an extended family, I will get many supportive people.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
Also, there is no time to feel lonely, and I could share many items with my extended family.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
However, I consider having my personal time as the most important thing, so I think nuclear family is still better for me.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE

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