9/19 homework
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1. He didn't earn enough money. Moreover, his wife decided to get a job.
2. That house isn't big enough for us, and furthermore, it's too expensive.
3. We have plenty of money and workers; nevertheless, we hope to finish the house remodeling soon.
4. She's extremely rich; hence, she's not snobbish.
5. It was a windy and rainy night. nevertheless, I decided to go out.
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1. He didn\'t earn enough money. Moreover, his wife decided to get a job.
>>Therefore
2. That house isn\'t big enough for us, and furthermore, it\'s too expensive.
>> correct
3. We have plenty of money and workers; nevertheless, we hope to finish the house remodeling soon.
>> thus
4. She\'s extremely rich; hence, she\'s not snobbish.
>> however
5. It was a windy and rainy night. nevertheless, I decided to go out.
>>correct
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