9/19 homework
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[Give an action that is considered a bad manner in your country?]
In East-Asia including Korea, respectful manner to the elders is very important.
So, we very strictly learn about the manner like \'elders first\' from a kid.
The elders could be almost everyone older than me.
We should wait for them until they eat food first.
And speaking loudly too much in front of the elders is bad manner.
So, arguing with the elders is often look like rude.
Although culture is changing and relieved more and more, it is still more strict compared with western culture.
I heard that looking at elder\'s eyes is good manner even the elders are upset.
However, this is really rude attitude in Korea.
There are so many kinds of manner and culture according to the country.
So, when I go abroad, finding a different culture is very interesting to me.
However, I know even if some cultures are different depends on the region, the sincere mind is delivered in whole world.
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Hi [이름]! Nice thoughts you have here! ^ ^ I learned a very important manner you have in Korea. Thanks for sharing! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
In East-Asia including Korea, respectful manner to the elders is very important.
>>CORRECT
So, we very strictly learn about the manner like \'elders first\' from a kid.
So, we very strictly learn about the manner like \'elders first\' from a kid.
>>So, we were strictly taught about manners like \"elders first\" since childhood.
The elders could be almost everyone older than me.
The elders could be almost everyone older than me.
>>CORRECT
We should wait for them until they eat food first.
We should wait for them until they eat food first.
>>We should wait for them until they have eaten their food first. (or have taken the first bite.)
And speaking loudly too much in front of the elders is bad manner.
And speaking loudly too much in front of the elders is bad manner.
>>And speaking loudly in front of the elders is a bad manner.
So, arguing with the elders is often look like rude.
So, arguing with the elders is often look like rude.
>>So, arguing with the elders is such a rude manner.
Although culture is changing and relieved more and more, it is still more strict compared with western culture.
Although culture is changing and relieved more and more, it is still more strict compared with western culture.
>>Although culture is changing more and more, it is still more strict compared with western culture.
I heard that looking at elder\'s eyes is good manner even the elders are upset.
I heard that looking at elder\'s eyes is good manner even the elders are upset.
>>I heard that looking at elder\'s eyes is a good manner even when the elders are upset.
However, this is really rude attitude in Korea.
However, this is really rude attitude in Korea.
>>However, this is a really rude attitude in Korea.
There are so many kinds of manner and culture according to the country.
There are so many kinds of manner and culture according to the country.
>>There are so many kinds of manners and cultures for each country.
So, when I go abroad, finding a different culture is very interesting to me.
So, when I go abroad, finding a different culture is very interesting to me.
>>CORRECT
However, I know even if some cultures are different depends on the region, the sincere mind is delivered in whole world.
However, I know even if some cultures are different depends on the region, the sincere mind is delivered in whole world.
>>However, even if cultures vary from one country to the other, sincerity is one common factor in the whole world.
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