9.2 Homework

2014-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hello, Kelly! Good morning! What are some famous amusement parks near where you live? Have you been to them? What rides is this amusement park famouse for? There is a small amusement park near my home named Park Land.When my kids were [이름] age, we used to go there, but we don't go there any more. because my kids are not interested in riding anything now. I remember that the famouse ride was sled, especially my son was fond of riding sled very much. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank your sending this in. I\'m glad to know that you have good memories with your children going to amusement parks. Anyway, please my corrections. Have a nice day! ~KeLLy~ Hello, Kelly! Good morning!>> Correct!What are some famous amusement parks near where you live?Have you been to them? What rides is this amusement park famouse for?There is a small amusement park near my home named Park Land. >> Correct! When my kids were [이름] age, we used to go there, but we don\'t go there anymore. >> Correct! because my kids are not interested in riding anything now. >> Becaue my kids are not interested in amusement park rides anymore. I remember that the famouse ride was sled, especially my son was fond of riding sled very much.>>I  remember that the most famous ride at that time was sled, and my son was fond of riding a sled very much.Thank you! >> Correct!

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