9. 20 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences not more than 10.
Question: Do you prefer to go shopping alone or with friends? Why?
I prefer to go shopping alone. Because I think buying something for myself is my business so I don't want my friends to waste the time following me. During shopping, I need to have some time to think whether it's good for me or not. But if I go shopping with my friends, I'm very uncomfortable to have some time. Of course, I can ask it to my friends, but I don't like spending time with my friends doing shopping. Shopping is my business so whith my friends I want to do other things together like watching movies, eatting something or traveling.
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I prefer to go shopping alone. Because I think buying something for myself is my business so I don\'t want my friends to waste the time following me.
>> I prefer to go shopping alone because I think buying something for myself is my own business so I don\'t want my friends to waste their time following me while I shop.
During shopping, I need to have some time to think whether it\'s good for me or not. But if I go shopping with my friends, I\'m very uncomfortable to have some time.
>> During shopping, I need to have some time to think of what to buy but if I go shopping with my friends then I might feel uncomfortable to spend some time to decide.
Of course, I can ask it to my friends, but I don\'t like spending time with my friends doing shopping.
>> I can always ask from my friends but if possible, I don\'t like to go shopping with my friends.
Shopping is my business so whith my friends I want to do other things together like watching movies, eatting something or traveling.
>> Shopping is my own task so with my friends, I just want to do other things with them just like watching movies, eating something or traveling.
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