9/20 homework
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I totally agree with you. I guess the most difficult job is Customer Service Jobs. The job really becomes harder when we encounter rude or angry people. You really have to extend your utmost patience and understanding towards them. ^ ^ Just a note though; I\'m not quite familiar with \"emotion laborer\". I\'ve searched for the term, but only found \" emotional labor\". I hope you can enlighten me on this one. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I think most terrible job is on service job.
>>I think the most terrible job is on service related jobs.
We call it \"emotion laborer\" about the job such as a phone counselor or waiter.
>>We call jobs such as a phone counselor or a waiter \"emotion laborer\".
Even if someone\'s job is not included in emotion laborer range, we take effort to talk as much as kind.
>>Even if someone\'s job is not included in the emotion laborer range, we take effort to talk as kindly as we can.
However, some bad people think that their social grade is higher than emotion laborer.
>>However, some arrogant people think that their social grade is higher than the emotion laborer.
This is very serious social problem in Korea now.
>>This is a very serious social problem in Korea now.
They swear to phone counselor or waiter, and forcedly require apology to them.
>>They curse phone counselors and waiters, and force them to apologize to them.
I think the world society is changing to severe.
>>I think our society is relentlessly changing.
Everyone is busy and our stress increases more and more.
>>Everyone is so busy and our level of stress increases more and more.
We should control and reduce our stress in peaceful way not to other people.
>>We should try to control and reduce our stress in a peaceful way and not to vent it out on other people.
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