9.21 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
It's a good Monday. Let's start this week strongly.
A long holiday is waiting for us.
We can take a long holiday next week.
1) At a party, he met a pretty girl in white and fell in love with her instantly.
2) Your rude words hurt my ears.
3) Normally the business confidence level moves in line with the size of the organization.
4) We should be careful as mobile banking is vulnerable to frauds worldwise.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Mr. [이름]!
Great job today! All your sentences are correct. . I am really proud of your improvement. Thanks to your patience and hardwork. Keep it up, Mr. [이름]!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.It\'s a good Monday. Let\'s start this week strongly.
>> Correct.A long holiday is waiting for us.
>> Correct.We can take a long holiday next week.
>> Correct.1) At a party, he met a pretty girl in white and fell in love with her instantly.
>> Correct.2) Your rude words hurt my ears.
>> Correct.3) Normally the business confidence level moves in line with the size of the organization.
>> Correct.4) We should be careful as mobile banking is vulnerable to frauds worldwide. >> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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