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2015-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I think to be a good freind, we need some listening practice. If I can listen carefully and respond to their story, it would makes them feel good and take interest to me. lestening ability is stil important after I become their friend, because I have to maintain and develop our relationship. for example, cutting freiend's conversation will makes the friend feels bad.

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Hi there [이름]!^__^   Happy Thursday to you! Thank you dear for accomplishing your homework. The hard work that you put in it is very much appreciated. However, be very careful with your spelling and if you can\'t really be certain about some words you can always consult your dictionary. I actually agree with what you wrote. To listen and be heard as well is one factor that makes a good friendship. Do you have a lot of friends? If you\'re a good listeners then expect to have more in the future. Again, thank you and have a great evening [이름]!:)   ~Teacher Mayleen     I think to be a good freind, we need some listening practice. >> I think to be a good friend, we have to be good listeners.   If I can listen carefully and respond to their story, it would makes them feel good and take interest to me. >> YOU MEAN TO SAY: If I listen carefully and respond appropriately to their story, it will make them feel better and we will eventually befriend each other.   lestening ability is stil important after I become their friend, >> And when we\'re already friends, it is still important to listen to them.   because I have to maintain and develop our relationship. >> because I want to maintain  a good relationship as their trust towards me is still developing.   for example, cutting freiend\'s conversation will makes the friend feels bad. >> For example, interrupting when your friends are talking will make them feel bad.

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