9. 21 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Answer the question briefly:
Why is vacation necessary?
When we spend our time playing with my failmily or friends, we feel happy. If we work everyday, we can't feel happy. Even workholics should take a rest regularly. If don't, they will have disease because of stress.
강사 첨삭
Happy Chuseok [이름]! ~~
See you on Wednesday!
- Blair
When we spend our time playing with my failmily or friends, we feel happy. If we work everyday, we can\'t feel happy. Even workholics should take a rest regularly. If don\'t, they will have disease because of stress.
When we spend our time playing with our family and friends, we feel happy. If we work everyday, we can\'t feel that way. Even workaholics should take a rest regularly. If they don\'t, they will have disease because of stress.
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