9.22 Homework

2014-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi ma'am! Good afternoon! It's a nice monday. I feel fine because I had enough rest yesterday. How do you think computers have changed the world? Yes, I think that computers have changed the world very much. First of all, it helps us to calculate everything more quickly and it enable us to share a lot of information even though we live far from each other.What a convenience world we live in because of the computer.I think the computer will change the world more rapidly and we must use it to do something good. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi there Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your homework. Have a nice day and seize every good opportunity today! Take care!~Kelly^^ Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon! >> Correct. It\'s a nice monday. >> It\'s a nice Monday. I feel fine because I had enough rest yesterday. >> Correct.How do you think computers have changed the world?Yes, I think that computers have changed the world very much. >> Correct. First of all, it helps us to calculate everything more quickly and it enable us to share a lot of information even though we live far from each other. >> Correct. What a convenience world we live in because of the computer. >> We are living in a convenient world because of computer. I think the computer will change the world more rapidly and we must use it to do something good. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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