9.22 Homework

2015-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! It's a good day again! Everything is going to be right. Of course including the relationship with my wife. What can make you feel better when you are angry or depressed. Exercising can make me feel better when I an angry or depressed. I have been exercising at the gym for two months. I really enjoy it everyday with my wife. Sometimes I drink some alcohol when I am angry, but I think drinking alcohol is not god way to calm myself down. I think that exercising and talking with family members are good ways to remove our stress. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Mr. [이름]! I agree that today is a wonderful day again. I am glad that your relationship with your wife is very much okay. Stay happy and in love with each other.^^ Anyway, it\'s good to know that you have a lot of ways to deal with your anger. It is really good that exercising makes you feel better when you are angry or depressed. Enjoy working out at the gym with your wife. ~Kelly^^ Hi there! It\'s a good day again! >> Correct. Everything is going to be right. >> Correct. >> or: Everything is going to be alright. Of course including the relationship with my wife.>> Of course, including my relationship with my wife.What can make you feel better when you are angry or depressed.Exercising can make me feel better when I an angry or depressed. >> Exercising can make me feel better when I am angry or depressed. I have been exercising at the gym for two months. >> Correct. I really enjoy it everyday with my wife. >> Correct. Sometimes I drink some alcohol when I am angry, but I think drinking alcohol is not god way to calm myself down. >> Sometimes, I drink some alcohol when I am angry, but I think that it is not god way to calm myself down.  I think that exercising and talking with family members are good ways to remove our stress. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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