9. 22 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences not more than 10.
Question: Do you think people should have cosmetic surgery to enhance their looks? Why? Why not?
I don't think having cosmetic surgery to enhanve their looks is a duty. If someone want to do, they can do it. If someone don't want to do, they can keep their looks. It's a personal right. In my case, I don't want to have cosmetic surgery because having cosmetic surgery means that I admit I don't like my looks. I think I'm not beautiful as entertainers in TV but I like myself. I don't want to deny myself. I have seen myself in a mirror for many years so I will be shocked if I saw other one in a mirror through cosmetic surgery.
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>> I don\'t think having a cosmetic surgery done to enhance our looks is a duty.
If someone want to do, they can do it.
>> If someone want to do it then they can do it.
If someone don\'t want to do, they can keep their looks.
>> If someone doesn\'t want to do then they can keep their looks.
It\'s a personal right.
>> It\'s a personal decision.
In my case, I don\'t want to have cosmetic surgery because having cosmetic surgery means that I admit I don\'t like my looks.
>> In my case, I don\'t want to undergo to a cosmetic surgery because having cosmetic surgery means that I don\'t like my looks.
I think I\'m not beautiful as entertainers in TV but I like myself. I don\'t want to deny myself.
>> I think I\'m not beautiful as entertainers on TV but I like myself and I don\'t want to deny myself.
I have seen myself in a mirror for many years so I will be shocked if I saw other one in a mirror through cosmetic surgery.
>> I have seen myself on a mirror for many years so I will be shocked if I see a different face on a mirror after a cosmetic surgery.
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