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2017-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

1) Mount Everest is very huge. 2) Yesterday evening I went to movie theater. 3) At the moment I want to go to the park. 4) We enjoyed our holyday in Spain funny. 5) We were really hungry on last sunday. 6) The famous book "David Copperfield"is very interesting. 7) I was watching TV for two hours. 8) Peter is very friendly and everybody like him. 9) I can't come with you because I have to go to the academy. 10) The concert was really exciting and there were many people.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good afternoon! ^^


Thank you for doing this homework. :)

Now, what you have to do is go over the sentences again

and check the correct sentences I wrote.

This will practice your sentence construction.


Teacher Glenda

   



1) Mount Everest is very huge.

>> Correct
 2) Yesterday evening I went to movie theater.

>> Yesterday evening I went to the movie theater.
 3) At the moment I want to go to the park.

>> Correct
 4) We enjoyed our holyday in Spain funny.

>> We enjoyed our holyday in Spain, it was really funny.
 5) We were really hungry on last sunday.

>> We were really hungry last Sunday.
 6) The famous book \"David Copperfield\"is very interesting.
>> 
Correct

7) I was watching TV for two hours.

>> Correct
 8) Peter is very friendly and everybody like him.

>> Correct [Peter is very friendly and everybody likes him.]
 9) I can\'t come with you because I have to go to the academy.

>> Correct
 10) The concert was really exciting and there were many people.

>> Correct

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