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2019-09-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. similar to 2. formal arrangement 3. particular time 4. expect 5. warmth 1. I realized that i look similar to my boyfriend in face. I have heard that we look like each other. According to survey, people are attracted by people who looks like them and if they love, they take after each other more and more. 2. The formal arrangement with professor made me get into a big troble. Because i had already an appointment at that day. 3. I had craving for some snacks at night. It was a particular time to give me hunger. I went to pick some up at a convenience store. 4. I took around my area one last time, before i left. I expected not to come back here again that\'s why this area remind me of bad memories. 5. I used to wear a scarf every time for warmth and appearance. However i am mixing it up with a new bonnet these days.

강사 첨삭

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Jean

1. similar to
2. formal arrangement
3. particular time
4. expect
5. warmth

1. I realized that i look similar to my boyfriend in face. I have heard that we look like each other. According to survey, people are attracted by people who looks like them and if they love, they take after each other more and more.
>> I realized that my face looks similar to my boyfriend\'s. I have heard that we resemble each other. According to survey, people are attracted by people who look like them and if they have a relationship, they take after each other more and more.

2. The formal arrangement with professor made me get into a big troble. Because i had already an appointment at that day.
>>>> The formal arrangement with my professor made me get into big trouble because I had already  a prior appointment on that day.

3. I had craving for some snacks at night. It was a particular time to give me hunger. I went to pick some up at a convenience store.
>>>> I had a craving for some snacks at night. I usually get hungry at that particular time. I went to pick some food up at a convenience store.


4. I took around my area one last time, before i left. I expected not to come back here again that\'s why this area remind me of bad memories.
>>>>I look/walk around my area one last time, before I left. I expected not to come back here again that\'s why this area reminds me of bad memories.

5. I used to wear a scarf every time for warmth and appearance. However i am mixing it up with a new bonnet these days.
>>>>  I used to wear a scarf every time for warmth and fashion. However, I am mixing it up with a new bonnet these days.

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