9.23 Homework

Hi there! Good afternoon! It's raining here in Changwon. 1) Edison had become totally deaf at the time he turned fifteen. 2) Sun's heat and lightning are the two natural causes by wildfires. 3) The huge popularity in the twenty-20 cricket can be attributed to the establishment for the indian Premier League. 4) Many players have been accused of fixing matches. 5) many environmentalists have raised concerns on the excessive consumption of electricity during day/night cricket matches. Thank you!

Good afternoon Mr. [이름]! I hope that you are having a good despite the bad weather in Changwon. Anyway, thank you again for the effort in doing your homeowork. Just check my correction in number one for your improvement. Keep it up!^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good afternoon! >> Correct.It\'s raining here in Changwon.>> Correct.1) Edison had become totally deaf at the time he turned fifteen. >> 1. Edison had become totally deaf BY the time he turned fifteen.2) Sun\'s heat and lightning are the two natural causes by wildfires. >> Correct.3) The huge popularity in the twenty-20 cricket can be attributed to the establishment for the indian Premier League. >> Correct.4) Many players have been accused of fixing matches. >> Correct.5) many environmentalists have raised concerns on the excessive consumption of electricity during day/night cricket matches.>> Correct. *** ManyThank you! >> Correct.