9.24 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning! It rains here in Changwon.I felt that your voice was not good this morning. Do you have a touch of a cold? Be careful!
Do you think writing email has strengthened or weakened people's writing skills?
I think the writing emails has weakened people's writing skills. Because we can use a various information delivery systems these days.We have no longer needed any more using hand-writing. I think that it makes us to weak writing skills.
Thank you! Byebye!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework early. And thank you for your concern as well. Take care also and have a safe day.
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.
It rains here in Changwon.
>> It is raining here in Changwon.
I felt that your voice was not good this morning.
>> Correct.
Do you have a touch of a cold?
>> Do you have a cold?
Be careful!
>> Correct.Do you think writing email has strengthened or weakened people\'s writing skills?I think the writing emails has weakened people\'s writing skills.
>> I think the writing emails has weakened people\'s writing skill.
Because we can use a various information delivery systems these days.
>> Because we can use various information delivery systems these days.
We have no longer needed any more using hand-writing.
>> We no longer use hand writing.
I think that it makes us to weak writing skills.>> I think that it weakens our writing skill.Thank you! Byebye!
>> Correct.
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