9.24 Homework

2014-09-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good morning! It rains here in Changwon.I felt that your voice was not good this morning. Do you have a touch of a cold? Be careful! Do you think writing email has strengthened or weakened people's writing skills? I think the writing emails has weakened people's writing skills. Because we can use a various information delivery systems these days.We have no longer needed any more using hand-writing. I think that it makes us to weak writing skills. Thank you! Byebye!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework early. And thank you for your concern as well. Take care also and have a safe day. ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning! >> Correct. It rains here in Changwon. >> It is raining here in Changwon. I felt that your voice was not good this morning. >> Correct. Do you have a touch of a cold? >> Do you have a cold? Be careful! >> Correct.Do you think writing email has strengthened or weakened people\'s writing skills?I think the writing emails has weakened people\'s writing skills. >> I think the writing emails has weakened people\'s writing skill.  Because we can use a various information delivery systems these days. >> Because we can use various information delivery systems these days. We have no longer needed any more using hand-writing. >> We no longer use hand writing. I think that it makes us to weak writing skills.>> I think that it weakens our writing skill.Thank you! Byebye! >> Correct.

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