9.24 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good morning!
Are househusbands accepted in the society these days?
Yes. I can see some househusbands around me. I know that househusbands are on a rasing trend in Korea. I think that it is because the sexual equality and jobs crunch have become more common these days. Sometimes I also feel like that I want to be househusband for a while.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for your opinion about being a househusband. I didn\'t know that you want to experience being one.kkk. Anyway, enjoy the rest of your day and see you tomorrow.
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.Are househusbands accepted in the society these days?Yes. I can see some househusbands around me.
>> Correct.
I know that househusbands are on a rasing trend in Korea.
>> I know that househusbands are a rising trend in Korea.
I think that it is because the sexual equality and jobs crunch have become more common these days.
>> I think that it is because the sexual equality and crunch jobs have become more common these days.
Sometimes I also feel like that I want to be househusband for a while.>> Sometimes, I also feel like I want to be a househusband for a while.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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