9/24 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[“The only thing constant is change.” Do you agree with this statement? Explain.]
Wow... I think it\'s a very difficult and profound statement for me.
Above all, I agree with the statement.
Actually I thought about the statement just now because I never have been heard the statement.
It makes me be a philosopher.
Everything change according to the time, scientifically.
Everything is everything including physical and mental things.
Surely all material is aged and the mental thing is changed so many times even the last is same.
Even the belief for God is changing the depth every day.
I think if we agree and received the idea, we may be rid of obsession with the object or person.
I remember that real meditation is what is considered to be acceptable for my feeling and thinking and mind, not to be just peaceful.
When I admit myself from my body and mind sound, I can be peaceful.
I think the statement is relate to the idea.
I learned a very good statement and idea today from you.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for your thoughts on this one! I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
Change is the only constant thing in this world. Just like seasons, life and people changes too. You get things the way you like it and then something beyond your authority bumps you off. You gain friends, lose a few. You grow up and learn things you never thought you would know through your journey.
-Teacher Jedah
Wow... I think it\'s a very difficult and profound statement for me.
>>CORRECT
Above all, I agree with the statement.
Above all, I agree with the statement.
>>CORRECT
Actually I thought about the statement just now because I never have been heard the statement.
Actually I thought about the statement just now because I never have been heard the statement.
>>Actually I just thought about the statement now because I have never heard about this statement before.
It makes me be a philosopher.
It makes me be a philosopher.
>>CORRECT or
>>This statement is making me think like a philosopher.
Everything change according to the time, scientifically.
>>Scientifically, everything changes with time.
Everything is everything including physical and mental things.
Everything is everything including physical and mental things.
>>CORRECT
Surely all material is aged and the mental thing is changed so many times even the last is same.
Surely all material is aged and the mental thing is changed so many times even the last is same.
>>Surely all materials things wear out, even our mentality changes from time to time.
Even the belief for God is changing the depth every day.
Even the belief for God is changing the depth every day.
>>Even the depth of our belief in God changes everyday.
I think if we agree and received the idea, we may be rid of obsession with the object or person.
I think if we agree and received the idea, we may be rid of obsession with the object or person.
>>I think if we agree and receive the idea, we may be rid of obsession with the object or person.
I remember that real meditation is what is considered to be acceptable for my feeling and thinking and mind, not to be just peaceful.
I remember that real meditation is what is considered to be acceptable for my feeling and thinking and mind, not to be just peaceful.
>>I remember that real meditation is what is considered to be acceptable for my feelings, thoughts and mind, not just to be peaceful.
When I admit myself from my body and mind sound, I can be peaceful.
When I admit myself from my body and mind sound, I can be peaceful.
>>When I make my body and mind sound, I can be peaceful.
I think the statement is relate to the idea.
I think the statement is relate to the idea.
>>I think the statement is related to this idea.
I learned a very good statement and idea today from you.
I learned a very good statement and idea today from you.
>>CORRECT
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