9.25 Homework

2014-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hello ma'am! It's a nice day again. I feel happy because today is my payday. If you could change your job or profession, what would you do? My current job is limited to work for me. Someday,I must quit my job, maybe it will happen in the near future. I have got to prepare for my future profession. I think cooking is so attractive for me.It is very artistic and I am interested in it. After my retirement, I want to become a nice chef.so I would like to learn some kind of recipe.I am going to sign up for a cooking school next year.I have got to prepare something for my family. I feel something heavy. but I am happy now because today is our payday. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! This is indeed a nice day for you because it\'s your salary day. I hope that you enjoy it but don\'t forget to save for your retiremetn. kkk Anyway, have a safe day at work. See you tomorrow. ~Kelly^^ Hello ma\'am! It\'s a nice day again. I feel happy because today is my payday.>> Correct.If you could change your job or profession, what would you do?My current job is limited to work for me. >> My current job limits me explore/discover my highest potentials. Someday, I must quit my job, maybe it will happen in the near future. >> Correct.I have got to prepare for my future profession. >> Correct. I think cooking is so attractive for me. >> Correct. It is very artistic and I am interested in it. >> Correct. After my retirement, I want to become a nice chef. >> Correct. so I would like to learn some kind of recipe. >> So I would like to learn recipes. I am going to sign up for a cooking school next year. >> I am going to sign up for a cooking course next year. I have got to prepare something for my family. >> Correct.I feel something heavy. but I am happy now because today is our payday.>> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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