9.25 Homework

2015-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! 1) He did not, however, gain his object. 2) I would rather die, he exclaimed, than join the enemies of my country. 3) Friends, relatives, companions all deserted him. 4) When I was a bachelor, I lived by myself. 5) Today we love what tomorrow we hate, today we seek what tomorrow we shun, today we desire what tomorrow we fear. Thank you! Have a nice holiday and take care, see you next Wednesday!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework and for doing a good job. You are always determined to improve your skills which is really good. Anyway, please go over my corrections. Happy Chuseok and enjoy your time with your family! See you next week~ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! Good morning!>> Correct.1) He did not, however, gain his object. >> Correct.2) I would rather die, he exclaimed, than join the enemies of my country. >> “I would rather die,” he exclaimed, “than join the enemies of my country.”3) Friends, relatives, companions all deserted him. >> Correct.4) When I was a bachelor, I lived by myself. >> Correct.5) Today we love what tomorrow we hate, today we seek what tomorrow we shun, today we desire what tomorrow we fear.>> Today we love what tomorrow we hate; today we seek what tomorrow we shun; today we desire what tomorrow we fear.Thank you! Have a nice holiday and take care, see you next Wednesday! >>Thank you! Have a nice holiday and take care. See you next Wednesday!  

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