9.26 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! It's a nice Friday. Good afternoon! I just finished an executive meeting in our firm. So my homework is a little late than other days.
How much time do you spend with your family?
What do you like to do together as a family?
Actually, I don't spend much time with them. Because my son and daughter live in the other regions. My daughter lives in Seoul,the other lives in Pusan. We meet toghther a few times a year.I always miss them. Whenever we meet together,we spend time to eat out something special, and we often talk about preparing of our future.I usually do inspire and encourage them to become a nice person. I am about to eat out at a fancy restaurant with my wife tonight, because it's burning Friday.we will spoil ourselves tonight!
Thank you! Have a nice weekend!
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for finding time to finish your homework despite your busy schedule today. Anyway, Just have fun with your wife tonight. Enjoy your dinne with her. Happy weekend!
~Kelly^^
Hi ma\'am! It\'s a nice Friday. Good afternoon! I just finished an executive meeting in our firm.
>> Correct.
So my homework is a little late than other days.>> So my homework is a little late than the other days.How much time do you spend with your family? What do you like to do together as a family?Actually, I don\'t spend much time with them.
>> Correct.
Because my son and daughter live in the other regions.
>> Correct.
My daughter lives in Seoul, the other lives in Pusan.
>> Correct.
We meet toghther a few times a year.
>> Correct.
*** SPELLING: together
I always miss them.
>> Correct.
Whenever we meet together,we spend time to eat out something special, and we often talk about preparing of our future.
>> Whenever we meet together, we spend time eating something special outside while talking about our future.
I usually do inspire and encourage them to become a nice person.
>> I usually do inspire and encourage them to become nice/good people.
I am about to eat out at a fancy restaurant with my wife tonight, because it\'s burning Friday.
>> I am going to eat out at a fancy restaurant with my wife tonight, because it\'s burning Friday.
we will spoil ourselves tonight!
>> Correct.Thank you! Have a nice weekend!
>> Correct.
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