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2018-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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Writing Exercise: What would you do if you got lost in an unfamiliar city? I have never got lost in an unfamiliar city. But if I get lost in an unfamiliar city, I will feel very scared. First, I will look around and find some landmark. If I am in the small and quiet street, I find some big road. Next I will use google map to seeking for the way to arrive. Also If there is someone who looks so kind and familiar with city, I will ask him/her how to go to my destination.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Please take note of the new expressions below.

Keep writing!

Good job!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I have never got lost in an unfamiliar city.

>> I have never gotten lost in an unfamiliar city.
But if I get lost in an unfamiliar city, I will feel very scared.

>> However, if I get lost in an unfamiliar city, I will feel very scared.
First, I will look around and find some landmark.

>>  First, I will look around and find a landmark.
If I am in the small and quiet street, I find some big road.

>>  If I am on a small and quiet street, I will try to find the main road.
Next I will use google map to seeking for the way to arrive.

>>  Next, I will use Google Maps to seek for the right way.
Also If there is someone who looks so kind and familiar with city, I will ask him/her how to go to my destination.

>>  Also if there is someone who looks kind and is familiar with the city, I will ask him/her how to go to my destination.

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