9/27 homework

Example: This is ___ house. Answer: This is our house. 1) I gave her the letter. 2) Are those your trainers? 3) Ken has cut his finger. 4) The children finished their game. 5) The hotel has its own swimming pool. ============================================= I feel sorry about delayed my class twice in a row.^^; But the friday party was so great! I had big fun with my friends. We booked a party room in Shin-chon. It was 200,000won for a night. There were five girls including me. (We all majoring in Ceative Writing.) We palyed in a big tub and we drank, talked all night 11 pm to 5 am. We talked about our school life, studying English, and boyfriends of each. My best friend broke up that day so it was the hottest issue. How sad that she did not even cry. (?) Anyway it was the most happiest night that being with my lovely friends.

Hi there^^

Thank you for doing your homework and sharing your Friday night^^

It\'s really enjoyable^^ I can\'t wait to have a chat with you about this.^^

Anyway, I made some corrections,  so please find time to review them^^

See you in class^^

Have a great day and take care^^

~T.Donna^^

Example: This is ___ house.
Answer: This is our house.
1) I gave her the letter. 

>>CORRECT!
2) Are those your trainers?

>>CORRECT!
3) Ken has cut his finger.
>>CORRECT!
4) The children finished their game.

>>CORRECT!
5) The hotel has its own swimming pool.
>>CORRECT!
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I feel sorry about delayed my class twice in a row.^^;

>>I feel sorry that I postponed my class twice in a row.^^;
But the friday party was so great! I had big fun with my friends.

>>But the party last Friday was so great! I had fun with my friends.^^
We booked a party room in Shin-chon. It was 200,000won for a night.
>>CORRECT!
There were five girls including me.

>>CORRECT!
(We all majoring in Ceative Writing.)

>>(We are all majoring in Creative writing./We all major in Creative Writing.)
We palyed in a big tub and we drank, talked all night 11 pm to 5 am.

>>We played in a big tub, we got drunk, and talked all night from 11pm to 5am.^^
We talked about our school life, studying English, and boyfriends of each.

>>We talked about our personal life/lives, like school life, studying English, and boyfriends.^^
My best friend broke up that day so it was the hottest issue.

>>My bestfriend broke up with her boyfriend, so that was the hottest issue.^^
How sad that she did not even cry. (?)
>>It was very sad but she did not even cry.
Anyway it was the most happiest night that being with my lovely friends.

>>Anyway, it was the happiest night that I had, so far, with my lovely friends.^^