9. 27 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences not more than 10.
Question: How could people resolve conflicts instead of through war?
Of course, conversation is the most important thing. Not only war but also personal relationship needs conversation to resolve conflicts. I know it is very diffecult to resolve conflicts with only conversation. Because people all have different values, cultures, interests. All want to be good to theirselves so conversation is very hard job. Nevertheless, People should do conversate each other instead war or fight. Because only conversation make people live together in the end.
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>> Correct!
Not only war but also personal relationship needs conversation to resolve conflicts.
>> Not only during war but also when it comes to personal relationship that we need to converse to resolve conflicts.
I know it is very diffecult to resolve conflicts with only conversation.
>> I know that it is very difficult to resolve conflicts through a conversation only.
Because people all have different values, cultures, interests.
>> Because all people have different values, cultures, and interests.
All want to be good to theirselves so conversation is very hard job.
>> Everyone want to be the best so conversing is really a hard thing to do.
Nevertheless, People should do conversate each other instead war or fight.
>> Nevertheless, people should converse with each other to resolve conflicts instead of fighting.
Because only conversation make people live together in the end.
>> Because it\'s only through conversation that we can resolve conflicts which will make us live happily together.
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