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2018-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

[What would you do if someone accused you of a crime you didn’t commit?] It is very sad situation. For example, When I was kids, this is often occurred in my family. I have a younger sister and brother. Almost always we argued and accused my mistake or secret to mother. Maybe we want to have all the mother's love. This is fortunately not serious situation. But, if someone accused me of a crime I didn't commit, I will be in panic. I think silence is not best solution. I should find an exculpable prove.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for taking the time in doing your homework. I appreciate your thoughts on this one. Indeed, it would be a very bad situation if you will be in this predicament. But like what you have said; silence is not the solution or, not doing anything about it is not an option. We have to find ways to prove our innocence no matter what it takes. ^ ^ 

-Teacher Jedah



It is very sad situation.

>>It would be a very bad situation.
For example, When I was kids, this is often occurred in my family.

>>I remember when I was a kid, this often occurred in my family.
I have a younger sister and brother.

>>I have a younger sister and a brother. 
Almost always we argued and accused my mistake or secret to mother.

>>Almost everyday, we argued and accused each other, we point to each other our mistakes and kept secrets from our mother.
Maybe we want to have all the mother\'s love.
>>Maybe, we all want to have our mothers\' love.
This is fortunately not serious situation.

>>This was fortunately not a serious situation.
But, if someone accused me of a crime I didn\'t commit, I will be in panic.

>>Correct
I think silence is not best solution.

>>I think, silence is not the best solution.
I should find an exculpable prove.

>>I should find an exculpable proof.

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