9/27 homework
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for taking the time in doing your homework. I appreciate your thoughts on this one. Indeed, it would be a very bad situation if you will be in this predicament. But like what you have said; silence is not the solution or, not doing anything about it is not an option. We have to find ways to prove our innocence no matter what it takes. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
It is very sad situation.
>>It would be a very bad situation.
For example, When I was kids, this is often occurred in my family.
>>I remember when I was a kid, this often occurred in my family.
I have a younger sister and brother.
>>I have a younger sister and a brother.
Almost always we argued and accused my mistake or secret to mother.
>>Almost everyday, we argued and accused each other, we point to each other our mistakes and kept secrets from our mother.
Maybe we want to have all the mother\'s love.
>>Maybe, we all want to have our mothers\' love.
This is fortunately not serious situation.
>>This was fortunately not a serious situation.
But, if someone accused me of a crime I didn\'t commit, I will be in panic.
>>Correct
I think silence is not best solution.
>>I think, silence is not the best solution.
I should find an exculpable prove.
>>I should find an exculpable proof.
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