9/28 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I often enjoy watching movies, especially romatic comedy or human drama.
It gives me refreshed when I am exhausted, and I simply enjoy it not to think deeply.
I also like watching musical movies.
They are plenty of wonderful music, and lead to intrinisic interest from my mind.
The best musical movie that I watched recently is \'Lala land\'.
The scene of LA in the movie was so beautiful, and OST was so good to listen repeatedly.
OTT services are rapidly developed, so I could easily watch movies anytime anywhere.
It\'s very convenient to select movies that I want and watch movies lying on the sofa and eating cookies.
Watching movie is one of the best hobby spending time and it enables people to experience indrectly.
I think thanks to OTT services, anyone could enjoy a good interests with ease.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, good day, Dr. [이름]!
Rom-com or romantic comedies can be one of the best escapes since they are very fun and light to watch. They do not demand critical analysis or a roller coaster ride of emotion like thrillers. Choosing a genre always depends on one\'s characteristics. I must say, you have a good taste for movies. ^^
Anyway, your homework answer was substantial, contains sentence combinations, have a few grammar suggestions, and has your distinct writing style. Your transition is impeccable and your flow of thought is as smooth as a river\'s. Kindl go through my suggestions below.
Keep up the excellent skill in writing always!
-T. Donna~
I often enjoy watching movies, especially romatic comedy or human drama.
>> Correct!
It gives me refreshed when I am exhausted, and I simply enjoy it not to think deeply.
>> It gives me refreshed feeling when I am exhausted, and I simply enjoy it not to think deeply.
I also like watching musical movies.
>> Correct!
They are plenty of wonderful music, and lead to intrinisic interest from my mind.
>> They are plenty of wonderful music and they lead to intrinisic interest in my mind.
The best musical movie that I watched recently is \'Lala land\'.
>> Correct!
The scene of LA in the movie was so beautiful, and OST was so good to listen repeatedly.
>> Correct!
OTT services are rapidly developed, so I could easily watch movies anytime anywhere.
>> Correct!
It\'s very convenient to select movies that I want and watch movies lying on the sofa and eating cookies.
>> Correct!
Or: It\'s very convenient to select movies that I want and watch them lying on the sofa while eating cookies.
Watching movie is one of the best hobby spending time and it enables people to experience indrectly.
>> Watching movies is one of the best hobbies to spend time and it enables people to experience indrectly.
I think thanks to OTT services, anyone could enjoy a good interests with ease.
>> I think, thanks to OTT services, anyone could enjoy this good interest with ease.
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