9. 29 Homework

2017-10-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lorna

학생이 쓴 원문

Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences not more than 10. Question: Have you ever been in a difficult situation while traveling? Elaborate your answer. When I went to Sendai, Japan last winter, I didn't eat fish or vegetables. Because I heard that the food produced in Japan is contamitated by radioactivity especially, fish and vegetables. Fish and vegetables look so delicious but I didn't eat them. It was so diffecult not to eat food which looked very delicious. I only ate meat and rice. Maybe I will not go to Japan again as far as possible.

강사 첨삭

Hey there, [이름]!:)
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~T. Lorna^^

When I went to Sendai, Japan last winter, I didn\'t eat fish or vegetables. Because I heard that the food produced in Japan is contamitated by radioactivity especially, fish and vegetables. 
>> When I went to Sendai, Japan last winter I didn\'t eat fish or vegetables because I heard that the food produce in Japan is contaminated by radioactivity especially fish and vegetables.
Fish and vegetables look so delicious but I didn\'t eat them. 
>> Fish and vegetables looks so delicious but I didn\'t try them during that time.
It was so diffecult not to eat food which looked very delicious.
>> It was so difficult not to eat those food that looks so delicious.
I only ate meat and rice.
>> Correct!
Maybe I will not go to Japan again as far as possible.
>> I may not go to Japan again. 

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