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2014-09-03 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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It was nice to meet you today and thank you for teaching. I'd like to live in a small city. Because I like a nature - fresh air, clean water and others. Sometimes I used to go hiking. And I don't like a big city - traffic, people pollution, noise and others. But my wife likes a big city. haha. So I have to live in a big city. As well as I think that big city gives us to easy life too. That is not bad.

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Hi there Mr. [이름]^^ I was also nice to meet you today! I really had a great time teaching and talking to you! I agree with you! I also like to live in a small town because it\'s more peaceful! Hahaha, so you have to follow your wife huh! You\'re a great husband then! Anyway, I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points. If you have some questions, you can just ask me in our class. Have a great day and take care^^ I\'ll call you again tomorrow :) ~T.Chelsea It was nice to meet you today and thank you for teaching.>> It was nice to meet you today and thank you for teaching me.I\'d like to live in a small city. >> CORRECT^^Because I like a nature - fresh air, clean water and others. >> Because I like nature; fresh air, clean water and others.Sometimes I used to go hiking. >> Sometimes, I go hiking.And I don\'t like a big city - traffic, people pollution, noise and others. >> And I don\'t like big city because of traffic, noise, over population and others.But my wife likes a big city. haha. So I have to live in a big city. >> But my wife likes big city. haha. So I have to live in a big city.As well as I think that big city gives us to easy life too. >> I also think that living in a big city gives us a convenient life.That is not bad. >> CORRECT^^

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