9/3 homework
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[Write ten things that you really like about yourself.]
I like my positive personality the most.
My friends say that I have a positive view of everything.
I have many friends having various personality, and I can understand them.
I think I can accept them as they are.
And I like my eating habits that prefer vegetables.
I like to know about the new information that I never knew before such as art or history.
So, I like myself with these curiosities.
I like my voice, long hair, and specially eyes without double eyelids.
I don\'t think I am a pretty woman, but I like my parts of body and face.
I like myself having interesting hobby that is writing a diary.
I like a minimal style of living and it looks well by myself.
It seems to focus on me and my mind.
I am an impulsive person, so I want to do something as soon as possible what I want to do.
I love my passion for family and work.
It makes me find a better life and direction for the future.
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I like my positive personality the most.
>>CORRECT
My friends say that I have a positive view of everything.
My friends say that I have a positive view of everything.
>>CORRECT
I have many friends having various personality, and I can understand them.
I have many friends having various personality, and I can understand them.
>>I have many friends having various personalities, and I can understand them.
I think I can accept them as they are.
I think I can accept them as they are.
>>CORRECT
And I like my eating habits that prefer vegetables.
And I like my eating habits that prefer vegetables.
>>CORRECT
I like to know about the new information that I never knew before such as art or history.
I like to know about the new information that I never knew before such as art or history.
>>CORRECT
So, I like myself with these curiosities.
So, I like myself with these curiosities.
>>CORRECT
I like my voice, long hair, and specially eyes without double eyelids.
I like my voice, long hair, and specially eyes without double eyelids.
>>CORRECT
I don\'t think I am a pretty woman, but I like my parts of body and face.
I don\'t think I am a pretty woman, but I like my parts of body and face.
>>I don\'t think I am a pretty woman, but I like the parts of my body and face.
I like myself having interesting hobby that is writing a diary.
>>I like myself having an interesting hobby that is writing a diary.
I like a minimal style of living and it looks well by myself.
I like a minimal style of living and it looks well by myself.
>>I like a minimal style of living and it looks well for me.
It seems to focus on me and my mind.
It seems to focus on me and my mind.
>>I can just focus with myself and my thoughts.
I am an impulsive person, so I want to do something as soon as possible what I want to do.
I am an impulsive person, so I want to do something as soon as possible what I want to do.
>>I am an impulsive person, so I want to do things immediately.
I love my passion for family and work.
I love my passion for family and work.
>>CORRECT
It makes me find a better life and direction for the future.
It makes me find a better life and direction for the future.
>>CORRECT
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