9.3 homework
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1. particular country
2. provided by
3. allow
4. permit
5. designed for
1. The passport is an official document provided by the goverment of a particular country which shows that the owner is a citizen of that country.
2. This is definitely error provided by hacker. I am sure that my social media account got hacked.
3. Amy big sound is not allowed in the library. So, we should be quiet with silence.
4. Visitors are not permitted to take photographs in exhibtion.
5. These days we can see many kiosk machines designed for helping pusrchase products efficiently to customers in most restaurants. Therefore, we can order easily menus we want to eat without help of clerks.
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1. particular country
2. provided by
3. allow
4. permit
5. designed for
1. The passport is an official document provided by the government of a particular country, which shows that the owner is a citizen of that country.
>> correct
2. This is definitely error provided by hacker. I am sure that my social media account got hacked.
>> This is definitely an error caused by a hacker. I am sure that my social media account got hacked.
3. Amy big sound is not allowed in the library. So, we should be quiet with silence.
>> Amy, a loud sound is not allowed in the library. So, we should be quiet.
4. Visitors are not permitted to take photographs in exhibtion.
>> Visitors are not permitted to take photographs at the exhibition.
5. These days we can see many kiosk machines designed for helping pusrchase products efficiently to customers in most restaurants. Therefore, we can order easily menus we want to eat without help of clerks.
>> These days, we can see many kiosk machines designed to help customers purchase products efficiently in most restaurants. Therefore, we can order the menus easily without the help of clerks.
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