9.30 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good afternoon! Finally, It is the last day in September. Thanks again for your hard work for a month.I am really expected in Oct, because it's fall and we can have more chances to enjoy our trip.
Would you ever consider living permanently in a different country? Why or why not?
I never consider living permanently in a different country until now.I love to live in the Korea permanently. Because there are many people who have a good relationship with me. I love them and I would like to live in Korea with them. I think it's so hard to live in a different country for me physically and mentally. I am satisfied with just going on a trip in the other country. I love Korea.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Mr. [이름]!
I also want to thank you for being diligent this month and always. That is why you\'ve improved a lot. You are always persistent and passionate in learning the English language. I\'m proud that you are my student. Keep it up!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good afternoon! Finally, It is the last day in September.
>> Correct.
Thanks again for your hard work for a month.
>> Thanks again for your hardwork this month.
I am really expected in Oct, because it\'s fall and we can have more chances to enjoy our trip.>> I am really excited for October, because it\'s fall season and we can have more chances to enjoy traveling.Would you ever consider living permanently in a different country? Why or why not?I never consider living permanently in a different country until now.
>> I have never considered living permanently in a different country.
I love to live in the Korea permanently.
>> I love to live in Korea permanently.
Because there are many people who have a good relationship with me.
>> Because there are many people here whom I have a good relationship with.
I love them and I would like to live in Korea with them.
>> Correct.
I think it\'s so hard to live in a different country for me physically and mentally.
>> I think it would be so hard for me to live in a different country, physically and mentally.
I am satisfied with just going on a trip in the other country.
>> I am satisfied with just going on a trip in other countries.
I love Korea.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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