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2019-10-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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I often did it when I took a taxi. Most taxi drivers in Korea are middle-aged men. I think they may be boring because they are driving whole day. So, they want to talk with passengers as much as possible. But, often it is uncomfortable for people. In general, they want to talk about the current social issue and politics or they pride their children. Especially, many drivers want to give an admonition for young people like me. I like to greet and talk just lightly with them. However, I don\'t want to make me boring and tired in a taxi. Many passengers think like me. So, at that time, I just go to sleep or I say \"I don\'t know anything about the social issue\". And, they show off their children\'s job or background. I think they want to achieve recognition to others. And they ask me what is your job. I heard on TV, a funny and excellent way is saying a doctor or judge or prosecutor. Because, those jobs are considered the most honorable jobs in Korea. it\'s fun.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this one! Well they say, lying is not good. But, in some occasions making excuses and sort of lying a little; giving \"white lies\" is fine as long as you do it for the purpose of saving yourself from a boring and tiring situation like in the taxi or saving yourself your sanity! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

I often did it when I took a taxi.
>>I often do it when I take a taxi.
Most taxi drivers in Korea are middle-aged men.
>>CORRECT
I think they may be boring because they are driving whole day.
>>I think they feel bored for driving all day.
So, they want to talk with passengers as much as possible.
>>CORRECT (or \"with their passengers...\")
But, often it is uncomfortable for people.
>>CORRECT
In general, they want to talk about the current social issue and politics or they pride their children.
>>Most of the time, they want to talk about the current social issues, politics or how much they are proud of their children.
Especially, many drivers want to give an admonition for young people like me.
>>CORRECT
I like to greet and talk just lightly with them.
>>CORRECT
However, I don\'t want to make me boring and tired in a taxi.
>>However, I don\'t want to feel bored and tired in a taxi.
Many passengers think like me.
>>CORRECT
So, at that time, I just go to sleep or I say \"I don\'t know anything about the social issue\".
>>So, whenever that happens,  I just go to sleep or I say \"I don\'t know anything about social issues\".
And, they show off their children\'s job or background.
>>CORRECT
I think they want to achieve recognition to others.
>>I think they want to receive recognition from others.
And they ask me what is your job.
>>And they ask me what is my job.
I heard on TV, a funny and excellent way is saying a doctor or judge or prosecutor.
>>I heard on TV, a funny and excellent way is to say that you are a doctor, a judge or a prosecutor.
Because, those jobs are considered the most honorable jobs in Korea. 
>>CORRECT
It\'s fun.
>>CORRECT

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