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I haven\'t experienced the situation, where someone shouts at me.
If I imagine the situation in which someone suddenly shouts at me, I might feel very embrassed.
Then, I will find the reason why this people act like this.
If I find my mistakes or false behaviors, I will solve the problem.
Also, if needed, I will ask him/her for forgiveness.
However, there might be no specific reasons for someones\' shouting.
In that case, I would be very angry about his/her action, but, if I fight with someone who shouts at me, it makes the situation worse.
So, I won\'t react, and I will ignore someone\'s strange action.
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I haven\'t experienced the situation, where someone shouts at me.>> I haven\'t experienced a situation when someone shouts at me.
If I imagine the situation in which someone suddenly shouts at me, I might feel very embrassed.
>> If I imagine the situation in which someone suddenly shouts at me, I might feel very embarrassed.
Then, I will find the reason why this people act like this.
>> Then, I will find the reason why this person acts like this.
If I find my mistakes or false behaviors, I will solve the problem.
>> If I find any mistakes or false behavior on my part, I will solve the problem.
Also, if needed, I will ask him/her for forgiveness.
>> Also, if needed, I will ask him/her for forgiveness.
However, there might be no specific reasons for someones\' shouting.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
In that case, I would be very angry about his/her action, but, if I fight with someone who shouts at me, it makes the situation worse.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
So, I won\'t react, and I will ignore someone\'s strange action.
If I imagine the situation in which someone suddenly shouts at me, I might feel very embrassed.
>> If I imagine the situation in which someone suddenly shouts at me, I might feel very embarrassed.
Then, I will find the reason why this people act like this.
>> Then, I will find the reason why this person acts like this.
If I find my mistakes or false behaviors, I will solve the problem.
>> If I find any mistakes or false behavior on my part, I will solve the problem.
Also, if needed, I will ask him/her for forgiveness.
>> Also, if needed, I will ask him/her for forgiveness.
However, there might be no specific reasons for someones\' shouting.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
In that case, I would be very angry about his/her action, but, if I fight with someone who shouts at me, it makes the situation worse.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
So, I won\'t react, and I will ignore someone\'s strange action.
>> CORRECT SENTENCE
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