9/4 homework

Hi [이름]! Nice of you to accomplish your homework. I appreciate it. ^ ^ Transition words are quite confusing at times! But, when used properly, a transition word can serve as a bridge that takes the readers from one idea to another, and will help improve the overall coherence of the write-up. Coherence is a very important aspect in writing which adds to how continuous and easy to understand the text is.

Continue learning! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

1. I had a terrible day at work and lost my umbrella too. (However)...

>> I had a terrible day at work and lost my umbrella too. At least, I spoke to that nice guy who works in the coffee shop at last!
2. Television turns people into lazy couch potatoes. (On the other hand)...

>>Correct
3. (Firstly) , I would like to welcome you all to the conference today.

>>Correct
4. (Though) the film was a little boring, we still had a nice evening out.

>>Correct
5. I\'ve always known Caroline as a mean person. (Besides)....

>>I\'ve always known Caroline as a mean person. However , she lent me $10 yesterday without me having to ask twice!
6. I got up at 9 o\'clock yesterday and had a cold shower. (Then)....

>>Correct
7. My brother works in a large office (whereas)...

>>Correct
8. Why do you think I don\'t want to go out tonight. (Actually)...

>>Correct
9. You should go to university as it gives you a chance to meet so many new people. (At least)...

>>You should go to university as it gives you a chance to meet so many new people. Moreover, it gives you the chance to get important qualifications and get a better job.
10. I don\'t want to go to the football game. Football bores me and I don\'t want to pay $40 for a ticket. (Moreover)...

>>I don\'t want to go to the football game. Football bores me and I don\'t want to pay $40 for a ticket.  Besides , look at the weather! All that rain!