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[If you could be an animal, what animal would you choose to be and why?]
If I can live as an animal, I want to be an ant.
My favorite book is \'Ant\' by Bernard Werber.
It read the book when I was a high school student and it was so impressive.
Ants are very smart and they know their family.
They are very small and look like very weak, but they live in groups.
An ant can not lift big food, but the ants join forces to lift big insects and share the foods.
I think if I could be an ant, life is not quite different from human.
In addition, I want to be a puppy and meet a lovely family.
My parents have two puppies and they love them so much.
I think If a puppy meets a good master, it can be a very happy life.
I don\'t want to be an eatable cow or pig.
I am not a vegetarian, but If I imagine my unnatural death by a murderer, it is very sad.
They can not expect when and how they die.
Suddenly, I wonder \"Can animals aware of their lives?\"
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for your thoughts on this one! I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^ I think I remember I gave you this homework, and yes, I remember about the ants too! ^ ^ But instead of just mentioning the same thing, you also added being a puppy and adding more thoughts about the topic! Nice job! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
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My favorite book is \'Ant\' by Bernard Werber.
My favorite book is \'Ant\' by Bernard Werber.
>>CORRECT
I read the book when I was a high school student and it was so impressive.
I read the book when I was a high school student and it was so impressive.
>>CORRECT
Ants are very smart and they know their family.
Ants are very smart and they know their family.
>>CORRECT
They are very small and look like very weak, but they live in groups.
They are very small and look like very weak, but they live in groups.
>>They are very small and look very weak, but they live in groups.
An ant can not lift big food, but the ants join forces to lift big insects and share the foods.
An ant can not lift big food, but the ants join forces to lift big insects and share the foods.
>>CORRECT
I think if I could be an ant, life is not quite different from human.
I think if I could be an ant, life is not quite different from human.
>>I think if I could be an ant, life is not quite different from humans.
In addition, I want to be a puppy and meet a lovely family.
In addition, I want to be a puppy and meet a lovely family.
>>CORRECT
My parents have two puppies and they love them so much.
My parents have two puppies and they love them so much.
>>CORRECT
I think If a puppy meets a good master, it can be a very happy life.
I think If a puppy meets a good master, it can be a very happy life.
>>I think if a puppy meets a good master, it can live a very happy life.
I don\'t want to be an eatable cow or pig.
I don\'t want to be an eatable cow or pig.
>>CORRECT
I am not a vegetarian, but If I imagine my unnatural death by a murderer, it is very sad.
I am not a vegetarian, but If I imagine my unnatural death by a murderer, it is very sad.
>>I am not a vegetarian, but if I imagine my unnatural death by a butcher, it is very sad.
They can not expect when and how they die.
They can not expect when and how they die.
>>CORRECT
Suddenly, I wonder \"Can animals aware of their lives?\"
Suddenly, I wonder \"Can animals aware of their lives?\"
>>Suddenly, I wonder \"Can animals be aware of their lives?\"
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