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The advantage of living in an apartment is that an apartment is usually much more comfortable than a house.
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>>The advantage of living in an apartment is that an apartment is usually much more comfortable to live in than a house.
A house has a lot of things to be taken care of.
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>>In a house, you need to manage a lot of things.
When you live in a house, you have to cut the grass regularly, go out to the city by a car.
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>>Living in a house requires maintenance and must have a personal car.
Apartments, on the other hand, is taken care by janitors and securities.
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>>Apartments are protected by securities and maintained by housekeepers.
There are many kinds of transportation to take when traveling.
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>>There are various means of transportation to take.
However, you have to be aware of neighbors in an apartment.
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>>However, you need to be mindful of your neighbors.
It is hard to do laundarys and washing dishes because of noises.
>>It is hard to do laundries and washing dishes because of the noise.
In contrast, living in a house is more free.
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>>On the contrary, living in a house is gives freedom.
If there\'s a child, having a front yard can be good for their education and emotional development.
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>>For a family man, having yards can be a conducive environment to nurture their kids needs.
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