9/5 home work
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr [이름]! I like our new schedule. We\'ll have free talking for two days and we\'ll study the book for three days. Keep inspired with your English study Sir! Keep on practicing!
~t. KELLY~
If I had a million dolars? That\'s really fantastcalness!
>> If I have a million dollars, that\'s really fantastic!
First, I\'ll buy a wide fancy garden house.
>> Correct.
and then I will plant some tree such as apple,apricot tree,etc.
>>
and then I will plant some trees such as apple,apricot tree,etc.
>> I would like to live longer and take it easy.
>> I live a busy and tight life these days.
I want to progress my class that Monday,Wesnesday,Friday to be learn book,
>> I want to continue my class and study the book every Monday, Wednesday and Friday.
Tuesday,Thursday to be free talking.please confirm.
>> Tuesday and Thursday will be our free talking day. CORRECT!
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