9. 5. Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Answer the question briefly:
Why do you think there are so many diet trends?
There're many people who have a job relating diet. So that people need to make diet trends and sell products they developed I think. I don't like follow diet trends. My only wish is to live healty.
강사 첨삭
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- Blair
There\'re many people who have a job relating diet. So that people need to make diet trends and sell products they developed I think. I don\'t like follow diet trends. My only wish is to live healty.
There are many people who have a job relating diet. that people need to make diet trends and sell products they developed I think. I don\'t like follow diet trends. My only wish is to live healthy.
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